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What is it behind her back?

What is it behind her back?

Painting Painting \ Uncategorized | 01/14/08 @277 | JordanRoots | Comments critiques (18) | Views views (827)


What is it behind her back?
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My latest.
I just can't find anything to say about it. It has no strong concept, nor does it have a real background :p
She's a bride about to kill her fiancé. she's supposed to look Asian, did I succeed? i'm not totally convinced.

photoshop CS3,
comments are appreciated :) thanks for watching !

Here is the original version of this work: http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/JordanRoots/originalversion.jpg

and here's the beige version: http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/JordanRoots/cremeversion.jpg
 
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Avatar Itzpapalotl

 01/14/08 @380

ha i like it. she looks Eurasian to me. i like the abstract bg. her hair looks a bit funny and the forearm holding the bouquet. still good though +8/9 ^.^ bc ive seen better form you (no offense)
 
Avatar SandraS

 01/14/08 @435

Well done! I like a lot her face, too bad one eye is hidden. I agree with itzpapalotl, she looks asian with some western traits. Good job with the textures. You was able to make a plain background look interesting. ;) One crit is that her dress looks cut&pasted. A little flat. And overall I find it is a bit too saturated
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 01/14/08 @595

I really like the subtle nature of this compared to your others. Nice change of pace almost for you. Love the background colour...I may use that myself lol
 
Avatar twistoflime

 01/14/08 @688

Nice painting. Good colors and textures. Depending on the girls intentions one bird might be better than two. Her bottom half looks too small.
 
Avatar Florence

 01/14/08 @798

Very nice! I like it a lot! I like her face. The background looks nice too! Beau travail!! :)
 
Avatar ersen-t

 01/14/08 @814

nice colors in the background.
good work on her face.
 
Avatar Daykan

 01/14/08 @829

WOWWWWWW!!
Beautiful!!!! Great work, Masterdudeman!
Composition it´s awesome, the girl... wooooaaaaaahhhhhh!!
Wonderful work, Jordan!!
 
Avatar JordanRoots

 01/14/08 @845

Kat: Could you tell me in what way the hair looks funny? I will edit it for sure ! I agree about the arm holding the bouquet, I had a hard time with it. thanks for your comment, oh and, BTW, I totally agree: it's really not one of my best.

Sandra: I followed your advice and desaturated the dress a little, it was true that it was overly saturated, it made it appear pink. Thanks for your support. :)

Andy: thanks again mate! The color scheme was originally red like that, but then I totally changed the concept and it became beige, and I changed it back to red. the other versions are linked in the description now.

Twistoflime, Florence, ersen-t, Matias: Thanks! merci!
 
asomatous

 01/14/08 @937

the dress looks a bit cut-out... there aren't enough variations in texture/sadow on the dress to disguise the flatness... the lightsource on the face should leave a cast-shadow beneath the hair.. and the flowers should be shadowed more if we're gonig by the light source on the face. try to keep your light sources more consistant... otherwise, the colors are really well chosen.
 
Avatar purplerose

 01/14/08 @959

Nice work. I like the subtle background. Great job on the face even though she doesn't look Asian. ;) I think the angle of the dress could use some more work because it looks like it's facing a different direction than her torso is.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 01/15/08 @015

Beautiful work!....Very nice strokes on the bg....
Nice skin colors!......She looks Latinamerican to me.
Carlos
 
Avatar kayness

 01/15/08 @138

nice work Jordan! I love he face - and yes I do think she looks Asian! esp the epicanthic folds and everything. great job on the bouquets as well. the body needs more work though!
 
Avatar SandraS

 01/15/08 @861

It looks much better now after you edited it! And from all the versions you worked on, this is the best I think. :)
 
Avatar herrwestphal

 01/16/08 @055

Nice. Really nice work.
 
Avatar aiscape

 01/18/08 @891

She looks beautiful and at least one of their ancestors was asian ;)
Really nice work. You're getting better and better...
 
Avatar rao

 01/20/08 @779

Nice work :)
 
Avatar Avantis

 01/21/08 @978

I think the colours look really nice. Alot of effort has been put into the face and it shows, really good work but the rest of the body looks flat, you need to add more volume and definition in the torso and arms.
 
Avatar EmyRoots

 02/01/08 @152

tres beau dessin :p
 
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